What is that one thing that you will not change about yourself and why?
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One thing that I will not change about myself is eating only what I want and like. I don\'t eat mushrooms and oysters because I don\'t like texture of them. I know this eating habits are not good but correcting my bad eating habits is not easy. Maybe I will not be able to correct them. / Another thing that I will not change about myself is my taste. My taste is fresh and simple. So, when I choose something, I choose fresh and simple things.
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Hi Kimberly:)
I have the same eating habit and I know it\'s hard to change. But you know, little steps can go a long way.
PS: Please indicate the specific taste. (Ex. Taste in music, Taste in Fashion, Taste in Movies. etc.)
One thing that I will not change about myself is eating only what I want and like.
>> The one thing that I will not change about myself is only eating what I want and like.
I don\'t eat mushrooms and oysters because I don\'t like texture of them.
>> CORRECT
I know this eating habits are not good but correcting my bad eating habits is not easy.
>> I know this eating habits is not good but it\'s not easy to correct it.
Maybe I will not be able to correct them. /
>> Maybe I will not be able to correct them at all.
Another thing that I will not change about myself is my taste.
>>Another thing that I will not change about myself is my taste in different things.
My taste is fresh and simple.
>> My taste in thing are simple and fresh.
So, when I choose something, I choose fresh and simple things.
>>So when I choose something, I usually pick the ones that are simple and fresh.
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