What is the appropriate age to start dating? Why?
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I think the right age to start a relationship is 15 years old. Because I think it is too fast for elementary school students to date. I think 14 years old, the first year of middle school, is also early. I think 15 years old is the most appropriate.
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I think the right age to start a relationship is 15 years old.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I think it is too fast for elementary school students to date.
>>> CORRECT!
I think 14 years old, the first year of middle school, is also early.
>>> I think 14 years old, the first year of middle school is also early.
I think 15 years old is the most appropriate.
>>> CORRECT!
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