What is the beginning of conversation?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is most difficult for me to talk to unfamiliar, uncomfortable or distrustful people.
So I rarely talk about serious and deep story with them.
I generally start conversation by asking them or their family’s regards.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Thank you for making the time to write today.
I know you\'re very busy.
Just continue doing your best and everything would turn out fine. ^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is most difficult for me to talk to unfamiliar, uncomfortable or distrustful people.
>> Correct
So I rarely talk about serious and deep story with them.
So I rarely talk about serious and deep story with them.
>> So I rarely talk about serious and deep stories with them.
I generally start conversation by asking them or their family’s regards.
I generally start conversation by asking them or their family’s regards.
>> I generally start conversation by asking about them or their family’s condition.
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