What is the best?

2011-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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I want to go somewhere alone. I love foreign fravel. Because one of my dream is tavel from place to place. Just like travel around the world. and sometimes I want to go travel on foot like Viya - Han.Most imfortantting is I want to start travels at this time.I will plan for travel somewhere during a 1 week. Ofcours alone myself. p.s : Dear my friend Joanna... I hear about your bad condition. I am sorry... I am so worry about you. I think about you always healty and strong but soft. I miss you.... Please take care of yourself. And do not worry about me. I stay here for you. I want to help you. But I don't know how can I help you.... Good luck!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Risbon! Thank you so much for your sincere concern. I am okay now. I can talk with you tomorrow. About your plan to travel alone, wow, that would be great! You're looking forward to taking things easy for a week to a place you will never ever regret of visiting. I tell you, once you've got the travel bug, it becomes very hard to stay in the same place for too long. Take things easy, my friend! Life is short. Make fun without doing any resentment on anyone's part. Just dream what you want to dream. Go where you want to go. Because you only have one life and only one chance to do all the good things you want to do in this world. Love yah! It's me, T. Joanna   I want to go somewhere alone. >>correct! I love foreign fravel. >>I love to travel to foreign places. Because one of my dream is tavel from place to place. >>This is so because I want to travel from one place to another place. Just like travel around the world. and sometimes I want to go travel on foot like Viya - Han. >>It's just like travelling around the world and sometimes I was thinking of traveling on foot like Viya Han. Most imfortantting is I want to start travels at this time.I will plan for travel somewhere during a 1 week. >>This is the most important thing that I want to start now. I will be planning to travel somewhere for a week. Ofcours alone myself. >>Of course alone! p.s : Dear my friend Joanna... >>P.S. My dear friend, Joanna, I hear about your bad condition. >>I heard about your bad condition. I am sorry... >>I am sorry. I am so worry about you. >>I am so sorry for you. I think about you always healty and strong but soft. >>I always think about you as healthy and strong but soft hearted. I miss you.... >>I miss you. Please take care of yourself. >>correct! And do not worry about me. >>correct! I stay here for you. >>correct! I want to help you. But I don't know how can I help you.... >>I want to help you but I don't know how I can help you. Good luck!!! >>Good luck!

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