What is the best advice you have ever received?-Teacher Vance
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I think the best advice I\'ve ever received is \"Be polite, be faithful.\" Last year, my school teacher always told my friends, including me, \"Be respectful and faithful.\"
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Mr. [Name] is also my current role model.
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First, before I give him the best advice I\'ve ever had, I\'m going to explain it first.
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He is my teacher last year. He is very good at sports, especially volleyball. And he values manners.
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Also, when he is very kind and nice to us, he is very scared when you scold us. So most students like him.
>>Also, he is very kind and nice to us, he is very scary when he scolds us. So most students like him.
So I\'m going to tell you the best advice from now on.
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He always said, \"Be careful of etiquette and manners.\" I don\'t think there\'s any better advice than this.
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And, with this advice, he\'s not my teacher now, but he\'s still taking his words to heart.
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So I think this is the best advice.
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