What is the best advice you have ever received?
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My best advice I\'ve got is that \"there are no secrets after you told someone\". We expect friends who are close with us to keep my secrets even if someone asks them about my secrets. We always said \"It is secret, and you are the only person who knew it. Could you keep my secret, please?\", before talking to our friends about our secrets. Do you think it works? I don\'t think so. I\'ve experienced revelations of my secrets. Someone talk to others intentionally because they don\'t like me and they are jealous of me. Otherwise, someone who really like me talk to others involuntarily. Sometimes, they even don\'t know what I said is secret and how serious it is for me. When I was sad because my friend told others about my secret, my boss told me that you must tell nobody if you really want to keep your secret. We want somebody to empathize with us. This is why we tell someone about our secrets accepting risks. But if you said your secret to friends, you would lose your secrets and friends.
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1. My best advice I\'ve got is that \"there are no secrets after you told someone\".
>> The best advice I\'ve gotten is that \"there are no secrets after you told someone\".
2. We expect friends who are close with us to keep my secrets even if someone asks them about my secrets.
>> We expect friends who are close with us to keep our secrets even if someone asks them about our secrets.
3. We always said \"It is secret, and you are the only person who knew it.
>> CORRECT!
4. Could you keep my secret, please?\", before talking to our friends about our secrets.
>> \"Could you keep my secret, please?\" before telling our secrets to our friends.
5. Do you think it works? I don\'t think so. I\'ve experienced revelations of my secrets.
>> CORRECT!
6. Someone talk to others intentionally because they don\'t like me and they are jealous of me.
>> Someone will intentionally tell others especially if they don\'t like me or they are jealous of me.
7. Otherwise, someone who really like me talk to others involuntarily.
>> Someone who really likes me might unintentionally tell others too.
8. Sometimes, they even don\'t know what I said is secret and how serious it is for me.
>> Sometimes, they don\'t even know that it was a secret and how serious it is for me.
9. When I was sad because my friend told others about my secret, my boss told me that you must tell nobody if you really want to keep your secret.
>> CORRECT!
10. We want somebody to empathize with us.
>> CORRECT!
11. This is why we tell someone about our secrets accepting risks.
>> CORRECT!
12. But if you said your secret to friends, you would lose your secrets and friends.
>> CORRECT!
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