What is the best age to travel? Can children appreciat the experience?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there is no the best age to travel.
There are perfect travels for every on their ages.
So although very young childern also can appreciate the experience.
That helps them have bigger containers their inside.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I agree there is no perfect age to travel. Thanks for writing your composition. :)
T.JAMIE
I think there is no the best age to travel.
>> I think there is no best age to travel.
There are perfect travels for every on their ages.
>> There are perfect travels for everyone at every age
So although very young childern also can appreciate the experience.
>> So, even very young children can appreciate the experience.
That helps them have bigger containers their inside.
>> That helps them expand their inner worlds.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.