What is the best and worst purchases you’ve ever made?
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Hi, Nova.
My the best purchases are present for my parents.
My the worst purchases are that I exhausted money as drink.
Good night. Okkay~~~~ BY~~~~ BY~~~~ ;)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for sharing this one with me. However, please try to elaborate more on your answers.Good job, though.
P.S \"Bye\" is spelled like this.
~Teacher Nova
My the best purchases are present for my parents.
>> My best purchases were the presents for my parents.
My the worst purchases are that I exhausted money as drink.
>> My worst purchases were the alcohol that I drink sometimes (or is most of the time?).
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