What is the best and worst thing about traveling to a new country?

2020-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I have been to lots of countries like Thailand, Australia and Singapore. The best thing I had experience in new country is to meet new friends! When I went to Thailand and Australia, I went to international school and met some good friends. I really liked that I could make lots of different kinds of friends. And the worst thing sometimes can be about weather or missing my friends in Korea or something. I don\'t really think I have the worst things so I think going to a new country have lots of advantages.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
I\'m glad that your overall experience to each country was good.
Meeting new people and making friends are really great! 
I hope that when you get to travel to a different country again, then you\'ll be able to make more friends. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I have been to lots of countries like Thailand, Australia and Singapore. 
>> CORRECT.
The best thing I had experience in new country is to meet new friends! 
>> The best thing I had experienced in a new country was to meet new friends! 
When I went to Thailand and Australia, I went to international school and met some good friends.
>> When I went to Thailand and Australia, I went to an international school and met some good friends.
I really liked that I could make lots of different kinds of friends. 
>> CORRECT.
And the worst thing sometimes can be about weather or missing my friends in Korea or something. 
>> CORRECT.
I don\'t really think I have the worst things so I think going to a new country have lots of advantages.
>> CORRECT.

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