What is the best birthday gift that you have received?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best birthday gift is Tayoslide.
And my two wheel skooter.
And Tamia car for Santa clause
And my dog doll for Santa Clause too.
And lastly Deform block for Santa Clause too.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Great answers! See you in a bit in our class ^^
T. DON
HOMEWORK:
What is the best birthday gift that you have received?
My best birthday gift is Tayoslide.
>> CORRECT
OR:
>> My best birthday gift that I have received was the Tayoslide and my two wheel scooter.
And Tamia car for Santa clause. And my dog doll for Santa Clause too. And lastly Deform block for Santa Clause too.
>> My Tamia car, Dog doll as well as the Deform block which was given by Santa Clause are also my other best birthday gifts.
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