What is the best car you ever had?
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Well, if my memory serves me right, it was in 2007 when I got my drive license I felt over the moon. Because I wanted to travel by my car for a long time. At that time I purchased a used car - Verna of Hyundai- from my one of my friends on a cheap price. Since then, before I tied the knot, when I have ample time, I went car travelling with my colleagues and friends and it is memorable experiences in my life.
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Good evening [이름]!
A good car can bring you to good places. That is when you also have the perfect company. So drive that perfect car that suits you well together with the people you love to places you always wanted to be!
Thanks for answering my question. See you again in class soon.
-T. Donna =)
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Or: Well, if my memory serves me right, it was in 2007 when I got my driver\'s license and I felt over the moon.
Because I wanted to travel by my car for a long time. At that time I purchased a used car - Verna of Hyundai- from my one of my friends on a cheap price.
>> I wanted to travel by my car for a long time. At that time, I purchased a used car - Verna of Hyundai from one of my friends on a cheap price.
Since then, before I tied the knot, when I have ample time, I went car travelling with my colleagues and friends and it is memorable experiences in my life.
>> Since then, before I tied the knot, when I have ample time, I went car travelling with my colleagues and friends and those are memorable experiences in my life.
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