What is the best dish for you to eat when you’re relaxing at home?
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Hello Erin!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
My best dish I remember is a bagel with feta cheese on top, sun-dried tomatoes, olive oil and parsley.
>> The best dish for me that I remember is a bagel with feta cheese, sun-dried tomatoes, olive oil, and parsley on top.
The reason why I remember is It\'s really delicious and looks good and I made sun-dried tomatoes myself.
>> The reason why I remember it is because it was really delicious and looked good and I made the sun-dried tomatoes myself.
Simply put, it\'s dried and then stored with olive oil and spices. It looks good because there are three colors.
>> It\'s simple to put together, it\'s dried and then stored with olive oil and spices.
It looks good because there are three colors.
>> CORRECT!
And It\'s perfect as a brunch with a cup of coffee.
>> It\'s perfect for brunch with a cup of coffee.
I could start a day happily(And even the weather was really nice.).
>> I could start a day happily with it, especially when the weather is really nice.
Sometimes cooking can be hassle. But I like it usually.
>> Sometimes cooking can be a hassle, but I like doing it usually.
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