What is the best food that you have ever eaten and, why?
학생이 쓴 원문
A lobster is the best food that I have ever eaten.
In Korea, lobsters are too expensive to eat.
Actually, I love seafood, and I especially like crabs.
Lobster is good to feel its taste at a mouthful because it has a lot of meat.
Although I can not eat usually, It is [이름]derful to enjoy their taste.
When I went to Myanmar for volunteering, I was able to eat alive lobster.
It was the most delicious lobster that I have ever eaten.
I will thrive, and I will earn a lot of money.
Then I will eat many lobsters with my family and friends.
강사 첨삭
Thank you, you just made me hungry!! ㅠㅠ
Thank you for this essay Chloe, you did great! ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> correct
In Korea, lobsters are too expensive to eat.
In Korea, lobsters are too expensive to eat.
>> correct
Actually, I love seafood, and I especially like crabs.
Actually, I love seafood, and I especially like crabs.
>> correct
Lobster is good to feel its taste at a mouthful because it has a lot of meat.
Lobster is good to feel its taste at a mouthful because it has a lot of meat.
>> OR: Lobsters are best enjoyed when you fill them in your mouth.
Although I can not eat usually, It is [이름]derful to enjoy their taste.
Although I can not eat usually, It is [이름]derful to enjoy their taste.
>> correct
When I went to Myanmar for volunteering, I was able to eat alive lobster.
When I went to Myanmar for volunteering, I was able to eat alive lobster.
>> When I went to Myanmar for volunteering, I was able to eat raw lobster.
It was the most delicious lobster that I have ever eaten.
It was the most delicious lobster that I have ever eaten.
>> correct
I will thrive, and I will earn a lot of money.
I will thrive, and I will earn a lot of money.
>> correct
Then I will eat many lobsters with my family and friends.
Then I will eat many lobsters with my family and friends.
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