What is the best food to eat when you are sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
The rice porridge is the best food to eat when I am sick.
Because I can easily eat when I don\'t want to eat anything.
Also, It is easy to make with a rice and water.
And the sweet food like chocolate and jelly are also the best food to eat when I am sick.
It makes me powerful and happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Nicole!
You did so well! I\'m so proud of your writing! Keep up the good job and take note of the corrections as well so you can improve more. Great writing! See you on Thursday!
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Because I can easily eat when I don\'t want to eat anything.
>>Because I can eat it easily, even when I don’t feel like eating anything.
Also, It is easy to make with a rice and water.
Also, It is easy to make with a rice and water.
>>It is also simple to make with just rice and water.
And the sweet food like chocolate and jelly are also the best food to eat when I am sick.
>>Sweet foods like chocolate and jelly are also great to eat when I am sick.
It makes me powerful and happy.
>>CORRECT!
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