What is the best form of exercise for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] What is the best form of exercise for you? Why?
I think it\'s yoga.
I play yoga every morning.
And my mom said \"It\'s nice to see you trying to correct your posture.\"
When I play yoga, I think I am in a forest and I feel peaceful.
Yoga is good for calm myself.
I think yoga is a best form of exercise for me!
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Thanks for sending your homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What is the best form of exercise for you? Why?
I think it\'s yoga.
>> correct~~
>> or: I would say, yoga.
I play yoga every morning.
>> I do yoga every morning.
And my mom said \"It\'s nice to see you trying to correct your posture.\"
>> or: And my mom said that it\'s nice to see me trying to correct my posture.
When I play yoga, I think I am in a forest and I feel peaceful.
>> When I do yoga, I feel that I am in a forest and everything is peaceful around me.
Yoga is good for calm myself.
>> Doing yoga is good for calming myself.
I think yoga is a best form of exercise for me!
>> I think yoga is the best form of exercise for me!
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