What is the best friend?
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What is the best friend?
It is a difficult question.
We need friend in life.
They give us understanding, empathy, interest etc.
We can not live alone.
When we are gloomy, we get an interest from them.
When we have a good thing, we get a congratration from them.
Someone said as follows.
"If we have a true friend in life, his life is successful"
Is there a friend worth dying for?
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What is the best friend?
>> What is a friend?
It is a difficult question.
We need friend in life.
>>> In life, we need a friend.
>> We need a friend in our life.
They give us understanding, empathy, interest etc.We can not live alone.
When we are gloomy, we get an interest from them.
>> When we get gloomy, they cheer us up and stir our emotions.
When we have a good thing, we get a congratulation from them.
>>> When we get good things/ good news, they praise us.
Someone said as follows."If we have a true friend in life, his life is successful"
>>> Someone said," If we have a true friend, we have successful life.
Is there a friend worth dying for?
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