What is the best gift you have ever received and why is it so special?

2022-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I remember getting the best gift that is couple rings. When I first got a girlfriend, I got it as a 100th anniversary gift. It was pure gold. But after I broke up with my girlfriend, I realized it wasn\'t pure gold when I sold it. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

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I remember getting the best gift that is couple rings.

>> I remember that the best gift that I have received is a couple ring.

When I first got a girlfriend, I got it as a 100th anniversary gift.

>> CORRECT

It was pure gold.

>> CORRECT

But after I broke up with my girlfriend, I realized it wasn\'t pure gold when I sold it. :)

>> But after I broke up with my girlfriend, I realized that it wasn\'t pure gold when I sold it. :)

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