What is the best gift you have ever received and why is it so special?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best gift I\'ve ever received is one of my lego bricks.
Because it was my first gift that I received from my friend.
Because of that reason, the lego brick is the best gift I\'ve ever had.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Your friend is very thoughtful. He\'s a keeper. :)
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The best gift I\'ve ever received is one of my lego bricks.
>> The best gift I\'ve ever received is the Lego bricks my friend gave me.
Because it was my first gift that I received from my friend.
>> It was the first time I receive a gift from my friend.
Because of that reason, the lego brick is the best gift I\'ve ever had.
>> Because of that reason, that Lego brick is the best gift I\'ve ever had.
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