What is the best job for you? Why?
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My best job is cook because I like it and I want to make foods. So I think cook is the best job for me and I\'m cooking very well.(^^) I want to be a cook.
강사 첨삭
My best job is cook because I like it and I want to make foods.
>> The best job for me is to be a cook because I like it and I want to make food.
OR >> My dream job is to be a cook because I like it and I want to make food.
So I think cook is the best job for me and I\'m cooking very well.(^^)
>> So I think being a cook is the best job for me, and I cook very well. (^^)
I want to be a cook.
>> CORRECT
Wow! I didn\'t know that you\'re a good cook!^^~
Wow! I didn\'t know that you\'re a good cook!^^~
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