What is the best kind of treatment to help you relax?

2020-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

The best treatment for me to relax is have a peaceful time in my home. I wash my body with warm water, change into soft pajamas, stretch body and then go to bed early. Those things help me to relive stress of body and mental. The reason I prefer sleep early is it can prevent for me to think about stressful things. I think those are very basic but the best treatments to everyone.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]. It is great to hear from you and thank you for doing your homework. I have to say this is one of the best treatments I do for myself as well. ^^ I just did this last Sunday; however, instead of going to bed early, I watched television. It was very ^^ I will talk to you in class later. ~Teacher Jane \\m/


The best treatment for me to relax is have a peaceful time in my home. 
>>> The best relaxing treatment for me is to have a peaceful time at home. 

I wash my body with warm water, change into soft pajamas, stretch body and then go to bed early.
>>> I wash my body with warm water, change into soft pajamas, stretch my body and then go to bed early.

Those things help me to relive stress of body and mental.
>>> Those things help me to relieve physical and mental stress.

The reason I prefer sleep early is it can prevent for me to think about stressful things.
>>> The reason I prefer sleeping early is it can prevent me from thinking about stressful things.

I think those are very basic but the best treatments to everyone.
>>> I think those are very basic but the best treatment for everyone.

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