What is the best local event or festival in your country? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
The cherryblossom festivals are the best festival in Korea. many cities hold this festival every April.
The winter of Korea is quite long, it is almost over four months and is too cold outside.
Cherryblossom fesitval means start of spring and end of winter.
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The cherryblossom festivals are the best festival in Korea.
>> The cherry blossom festival is the best festival in Korea.
many cities hold this festival every April.
>> Many cities hold these festivals every April.
The winter of Korea is quite long, it is almost over four months and is too cold outside.
>> Korea’s winter is quite long—it lasts over four months and is extremely cold.
Cherryblossom fesitval means start of spring and end of winter.
>> The cherry blossom festival marks the beginning of spring and the end of winter.
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