What is the best memory you have in school? Explain in detail.
학생이 쓴 원문
The best memory I have in school is the memory about the school festival. Because when I entered school, due to COVID-19, I couldn\'t do anything. So, I couldn\'t enjoy the school festival and sports day. So, I was very sad. But in this year, I could be got an opportunity which I can enjoy the school festival. And at the festival, I saw different sides of my school\'s students. They sang a song, danced and rapped. Also, I could participate in many programs like putting the puzzle together and playing a quiz game. So, I felt so happy. So, I can\'t forget this day\'s memories.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly :)
I used to love school festivals as well! There are so many activities to do and you can mingle with the other students in you school which is really fun. :)
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The best memory I have in school is the memory about the school festival. Because when I entered school, due to COVID-19, I couldn\'t do anything.
>> The best memory I have in school is school festivals because ever since the pandemic started, I couldn\'t do anything.
So, I couldn\'t enjoy the school festival and sports day.
>> CORRECT
So, I was very sad. But in this year, I could be got an opportunity which I can enjoy the school festival.
>> This made me very sad but this year, I can have an opportunity to enjoy school festivals.
And at the festival, I saw different sides of my school\'s students.
>> At the festival, I saw different sides of my school\'s students.
They sang a song, danced and rapped.
>> CORRECT
Also, I could participate in many programs like putting the puzzle together and playing a quiz game.
>> Also, I could participate in many programs like puzzle making together and quiz games.
So, I felt so happy.
>> I felt so happy.
So, I can\'t forget this day\'s memories.
>> CORRECT
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