What is the best memory you have in school? Explain in detail.
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It is not the memory in my school but I\'ve been to the park where is near by my house with my school classmates.
I was a fifth grade of elementary school student, and I had many friends bacause it was before Covid19.
Before then, I have been many places with my friends but the one is the most memorable memory with my friends.
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That sounds like an interesting memory. I hope you can make more with your friends in the future.
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It is not the memory in my school but I\'ve been to the park where is near by my house with my school classmates.
>> It is not a memory that we had in school but I was at the park at that time, nearby my house, with my school classmates.
I was a fifth grade of elementary school student, and I had many friends bacause it was before Covid19.
>> I was a 5th grade student in elementary and I had many friends before the pandemic.
Before then, I have been many places with my friends but the one is the most memorable memory with my friends.
>>Before then, I have been to many places with my friends but that one is the most memorable memory with my friends.
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