What is the best memory you have in school? Tell me about it.
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The fifth grade\'s memories are the best memory that I have in school.
The memories of lower grade\'s than fifth grade, I can\'t remember it.
And after fifth grade, it is age of Covid 19 so there\'s no good memories yet.
When I was fifth grade, I had lots of friends.
And I played baseball with my friends every weekends.
So it was really really good time to me and I think all of my friends.
But starting my sixth grade, my best friends moved to other city.
And the age of Covid 19 started.
Becuase of these all of reasons, my best memories that I have in school is my fifth grade\'s.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! School days have a lot memories that we can cherish in a lifetime. That\'s usually the time where you would meet the people that would have a big role in your life. It\'s nice that you still remember a part of it:). Make more memories that you can look back at in the future.
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The fifth grade\'s memories are the best memory that I have in school.
The memories of lower grade\'s than fifth grade, I can\'t remember it.
And after fifth grade, it is age of Covid 19 so there\'s no good memories yet.
When I was fifth grade, I had lots of friends.
And I played baseball with my friends every weekends.
So it was really really good time to me and I think all of my friends.
But starting my sixth grade, my best friends moved to other city.
And the age of Covid 19 started.
Becuase of these all of reasons, my best memories that I have in school is my fifth grade\'s.
>> My 5th grade memories are the best ones.
The memories of lower grade\'s than fifth grade, I can\'t remember it.
>> I can\'t remember my memories before that time.
And after fifth grade, it is age of Covid 19 so there\'s no good memories yet.
>> After I became a fifth grader, COVID-19 came so there\'s not that much good memories yet.
When I was fifth grade, I had lots of friends.
>>When I was in fifth grade, I had lots of friends.
And I played baseball with my friends every weekends.
>> We played during the weekends.
So it was really really good time to me and I think all of my friends.
>> So it was a really good time.
But starting my sixth grade, my best friends moved to other city.
As I reached the sixth grade, my bestfriends moved into a different city.
And the age of Covid 19 started.
>> During that time, the pandemic started.
Becuase of these all of reasons, my best memories that I have in school is my fifth grade\'s.
>> Due to all these reasons, the best memories that I have was when I was in fifth grade.
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