What is the best memory you have in school when you were still studying?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most enjoy memory when I was a student was playing soccer with my friend in the playground. When I was in school, I had lunch time for an hour and a half after the 4th period. Then I remember playing soccer with my friends. And after school, children gathered at school and played soccer in the evening. I think soccer was one of the most interesting memories.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! School days have a lot memories that we can cherish in a lifetime. That\'s usually the time where you would meet the people that would have a big role in your life. It\'s nice that you still remember a part of it:). Make more memories that you can look back at in the future.
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The most enjoy memory when I was a student was playing soccer with my friend in the playground.
>> The most enjoyable memory I had when I was a student was playing soccer with my friend at the playground.
When I was in school, I had lunch time for an hour and a half after the 4th period.
>> CORRECT
Then I remember playing soccer with my friends.
>> CORRECT
And after school, children gathered at school and played soccer in the evening.
>> CORRECT
I think soccer was one of the most interesting memories.
>> I think playing soccer is one of the most interesting memories I had when I was still studying.
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