What is the best memory you have in school when you were still studying? Tell me about it.
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when I was high school student, I bet score game with my friends. the game was who get the highest score in middle test. we bet each 20000won. the number of participant is five. so if I got first, I got 6. I did do my best for middle test. I won second. so I got 30000won!! I wanted to be first but I was satisfied. that moment was that what I did my best in entire life.
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Hi John! School days have a lot memories that we can cherish in a lifetime. That\'s usually the time where you would meet the people that would have a big role in your life. It\'s nice that you still remember a part of it:). Make more memories that you can look back at in the future.
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when I was high school student, I bet score game with my friends.
>> When I was in high school, I played a bet with my friends.
the game was who get the highest score in middle test.
>> The winner will be the one who gets the highest score in the midterm test.
we bet each 20000won.
>> Each one bet 20,000 won.
the number of participant is five.
>> There were 5 paticipants.
so if I got first, I got 6. I did do my best for middle test.
>> So if I got it first, I will get 6. I did my best every time we had the test.
I won second. so I got 30000won!! I wanted to be first but I was satisfied.
>> I won the second time so I got 30,000 won. I wanted to be the first one but I was still satisfied.
that moment was that what I did my best in entire life.
>> That moment was that best in my life.
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