What is the best memory you have of Chuseok? Explain why.
학생이 쓴 원문
When i was young, My raletive gathered quite often in chuseok.
But as i grow up, it was really hard to familly gathering
We made a sonpen which is rise cake, korean traditional food
and i am crazy about sonpen
My younger brother and i watched TV, Those were usaully classic action mashar movie. And MY mom always gave us lots of sonpen and dilious things
As i think about it, i get to go back my childhood again.
and tomorrow I`ll go to the house of my mother in law first, then visit my house where my mom and father live.!
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I think i made you remember such a precious memory.
Thank you so much for sharing this memory of happiness with me.
I feel very happy for you.
It\'s good to know that you have already planned your days.
Take care on your trips!
Talk to you soon!
t. Angel
When i was young, My raletive gathered quite often in chuseok.
>>When i was young, My relatives gathered quite often during chuseok.
But as i grow up, it was really hard to familly gathering
>>But as I grew up, it was really difficult to have a family gathering.
We made a sonpen which is rise cake, korean traditional food
and i am crazy about sonpen
>>We made sonpen which is rice cake, a Korean traditional food and i am crazy about sonpen.
My younger brother and i watched TV, Those were usaully classic action mashar movie.
>>My younger brother and I watched TV which were usually classic action martial arts movie.
And MY mom always gave us lots of sonpen and dilious things
>>And my mom always gave us lots of sonpen and delicious things.
As i think about it, i get to go back my childhood again.
>>As i think about it, I remember my childhood again.
and tomorrow I`ll go to the house of my mother in law first, then visit my house where my mom and father live.!
>>And tomorrow, I`ll go to the house of my mother-in-law first, then visit the house where my mom and father lives.
I think i made you remember such a precious memory.
Thank you so much for sharing this memory of happiness with me.
I feel very happy for you.
It\'s good to know that you have already planned your days.
Take care on your trips!
Talk to you soon!
t. Angel
When i was young, My raletive gathered quite often in chuseok.
>>When i was young, My relatives gathered quite often during chuseok.
But as i grow up, it was really hard to familly gathering
>>But as I grew up, it was really difficult to have a family gathering.
We made a sonpen which is rise cake, korean traditional food
and i am crazy about sonpen
>>We made sonpen which is rice cake, a Korean traditional food and i am crazy about sonpen.
My younger brother and i watched TV, Those were usaully classic action mashar movie.
>>My younger brother and I watched TV which were usually classic action martial arts movie.
And MY mom always gave us lots of sonpen and dilious things
>>And my mom always gave us lots of sonpen and delicious things.
As i think about it, i get to go back my childhood again.
>>As i think about it, I remember my childhood again.
and tomorrow I`ll go to the house of my mother in law first, then visit my house where my mom and father live.!
>>And tomorrow, I`ll go to the house of my mother-in-law first, then visit the house where my mom and father lives.
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