What is the best memory you have of you and your family doing something together?

Hello Chloe!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My good memory with my family is make a family news for my elementary school vacation homework. 

>> A good memory I have with my family is making a family news for my elementary school vacation homework. 

The title was prohibition of smoking. 

>> The title was Prohibition of Smoking. 

My dad was smoked until when I was seven years old,but he stop smoking when I said \"dad please stop smoking!!It is bad for our health!!\". 

>> My dad used to smoke when I was seven years old but he stopped smoking when I told him, \"Dad, please stop smoking, it\'s bad for our health!\"

And I wrote it at my family news so finally I win a award!!

>> I wrote about it in my family news so finally, I won a award!!