What is the best memory you have of your family doing something together? Explain in detail.
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What is the best memory you have of your family doing something together? Explain in detail.
Doing something with my family is a happy event.
We don\'t meet each other often, so eating dinner together or going on a trip makes me happy.
The best memory is the trip to Hawaii which I went with my parents.
This trip was a free trip without a travel agency, we went on our trips freely.
Sometimes my parents told me that trip was excellent.
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Doing something with my family is a happy event.
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The best memory is the trip to Hawaii which I went with my parents.
>> The best memory that I have when I went to Hawaii with my parents.
This trip was a free trip without a travel agency, we went on our trips freely.
>> We were free to do anything since it was a trip with no travel agencies.
Sometimes my parents told me that trip was excellent.
>> Sometimes my parents tell me that trip was excellent.
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