What is the best memory you have of your family doing something together?
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The best memory I have of my family doing something together is the memory that I traveled America with my family.
I traveled a lot of places that are famous in their with my family, and though it was 4 years ago, I remember it clearly.
Because of this reason, I think the best memory I have of my family is the memory of traveling America.
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Hello [이름]!
What a wonderful memory! Thanks for sharing. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>The best memory I have of my family doing something together is the memory of when I traveled to America with my them.
I traveled a lot of places that are famous in their with my family, and though it was 4 years ago, I remember it clearly.
I traveled a lot of places that are famous in their with my family, and though it was 4 years ago, I remember it clearly.
>>I traveled to a lot of famous places there with my family, and though it was 4 years ago, I remember it clearly.
Because of this reason, I think the best memory I have of my family is the memory of traveling America.
Because of this reason, I think the best memory I have of my family is the memory of traveling America.
>>Because of this reason, I think the best memory I have of my family is the memory of traveling to America.
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