What is the best messaging app in Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
Kakao Talk is the best messaging app in Korea.
I can sure about it.
This is because most Korean use this app instead of massage.
We can use it with no fee, and also it is very convenient.
Not only that, we can have face talk and voice talk with this app, and they are also free.
We can make a chat room with many people.
Because of convenience, we usually use it more than the message app.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Chloe!
Here are my corrections.
Kakao Talk is the best messaging app in Korea.
>> Correct!
I can sure about it.
>>I am sure about it.
This is because most Korean use this app instead of massage.
>>This is because most Koreans use this app instead of text message.
We can use it with no fee, and also it is very convenient.
>> Correct!
Not only that, we can have face talk and voice talk with this app, and they are also free.
>> Correct!
We can make a chat room with many people.
>> Correct!
Because of convenience, we usually use it more than the message app.
>> Correct!
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