What is the best method of transportation when exploring a new city?
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Absolutely, it\'s a train [이름]ce I traveled abroad at the first time. Because I can know how clean the country is where I travel. If the train is dirty, people in that country tend not to take care about it including the smell. Following that, the train is the second convenient transportation except for a plane. Also, one of the ways advise something to people around the world. How fast, convenient, and clean it is to let them know.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Absolutely, it\'s a train [이름]ce I traveled abroad at the first time.
>> Absolutely, it\'s a train [이름]ce I traveled abroad for the first time.
Because I can know how clean the country is where I travel.
>> CORRECT!If the train is dirty, people in that country tend not to take care about it including the smell.
>> CORRECT!Following that, the train is the second convenient transportation except for a plane.
>> Following that, the train is the second convenient transportation aside from a plane.
Also, one of the ways advise something to people around the world.
>> Also, it\'s one of the ways I would advise something to people around the world.
How fast, convenient, and clean it is to let them know.
>> How fast, convenient, and clean are something they should know.
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