What is the best method to handle stress?
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Speaking of handling stress for me, I have a few options to choose. Firstly, I would like to keep silent to do nothing. when I have some concerns which are complicating, it becomes a huge burden for me to solve. Whoever wants to try to relieve my stress, it can't reach my actual satisfaction or goal. That is why I would rather be alone for a while than choose to talk to someone else. But sometimes, it is obviously better talk to someone to be heard their story or lesson from like my mother, she has a wise thinking about all the problems than me and I could get brilliant ideas from her that I can handle. Or I just think that time is a medicine for handling my stress. I know that I am a person who worried all the things that happen to me, so it is quite hard for me to let it go. So I just remind myself repeatedly to keep thinking like time files, time flies.
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Speaking of handling stress for me, I have a few options to choose.
>> correct
>> OR: I have a few options to choose on how I handle stress.
Firstly, I would like to keep silent to do nothing.
>> Better: Firstly, I would like to keep silent and do nothing.
when I have some concerns which are complicating, it becomes a huge burden for me to solve.
>> When I have some concerns which are complicated, it becomes a huge burden for me to solve.
Whoever wants to try to relieve my stress, it can\'t reach my actual satisfaction or goal.
>> correct
That is why I would rather be alone for a while than choose to talk to someone else.
>> correct
But sometimes, it is obviously better talk to someone to be heard their story or lesson from like my mother, she has a wise thinking about all the problems than me and I could get brilliant ideas from her that I can handle.
>> Did you mean: But sometimes, it is obviously better talk to someone in order to be heard their story or lesson like my mother, she is wiser and has a lot of the problems than me, I could get brilliant ideas from her on how I can handle those stressors.
Or I just think that time is a medicine for handling my stress.
>> Did you mean: Or I just think that time is a method on how I should handle stress.
I know that I am a person who worried all the things that happen to me, so it is quite hard for me to let it go.
>> I know that I am a person who is always worried about a lot of things that happen to me, so it is quite hard for me to let it go.
So I just remind myself repeatedly to keep thinking like time files, time flies.
>> Better: So I just always remind myself to keep thinking that time flies.
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