What is the best method to prevent the spread of infectious diseases?
학생이 쓴 원문
people are seized with panic because at least 20 person became confirmed patients about novel virus in a day.
I think that citizen have to manage it themselves to prevent it. Forexample, If the someone had a similiar symptoms of novel virus, They have to call it to the 119 or 112 quickly. They will assist with the tentative patient by escorting them to the hospitals with a [이름]imum of contacts with others.
Second, People [이름]d going to some place where crowded with a lot of people. It is possible to spread the virus person to person without symptoms. It is so strong to spread it that people can`t go some place like shopping malls,cafeteria and gatherings nawadays.
It will be a best ways to stop it.
The goverment officials are keeping track of the roots of patients and then they forced the facilites owner to close down and they make that place more clean.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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>>>> People are seized with panic because at least 20 persons became confirmed patients of the novel virus in a day.
I think that citizen have to manage it themselves to prevent it.
>>>> I think that citizens have to manage it themselves to prevent it.
Forexample, If the someone had a similiar symptoms of novel virus, They have to call it to the 119 or 112 quickly.
>>>> For example, if someone had similar symptoms of novel virus, he/she has to call it to the 119 or 112 quickly.
They will assist with the tentative patient by escorting them to the hospitals with a [이름]imum of contacts with others.
>>>> correct
Second, People [이름]d going to some place where crowded with a lot of people.
Second, People [이름]d going to some place where crowded with a lot of people.
>>>> Second, people should [이름]d going to some places which are crowded.
It is possible to spread the virus person to person without symptoms.
>>>> correct
It is so strong to spread it that people can`t go some place like shopping malls,cafeteria and gatherings nawadays.
>>>> It is so contagious that people can`t go to some places like shopping malls, cafeteria and gatherings nowadays.
It will be a best ways to stop it.
>>>> It will be the best way to stop it.
The goverment officials are keeping track of the roots of patients and then they forced the facilites owner to close down and they make that place more clean.
The goverment officials are keeping track of the roots of patients and then they forced the facilites owner to close down and they make that place more clean.
>>>> The government officials are keeping track of the whereabouts of patients and then they forced the facility owner to close down and they make that place more clean.
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