What is the best movie that you have seen?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Have you ever seen the Korea Movie?
When I was a student in the university, I liked to watch foreign movie at that time. especially I liked Hongkong movie.
Do you know Hongkong movie? the movie made by Hongkong & Taiwan.
Main actors were Mr. [Name], Mr. [Name] who were China movie star. they could do China action like a Takwondo of Korea very well.
but, now I liked a Korean Movie. In Korea there were a lot of movies. Do you know Parasite?
Do you know Minari? this movies had a Academic Award in USA last year and this year.
But my best movie is Gwanghae(Chosun dynesty King in Korea). it was very impressive movie for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
See you in our class later ^^
T. DON
Dear [Name],
Have you ever seen the Korea Movie?
Have you ever seen the Korea Movie?
>> Have you ever seen a Korean Movie?
When I was a student in the university, I liked to watch foreign movie at that time. especially I liked Hongkong movie.
>> When I was a student in our university, I liked to watch foreign movies at that time especially Hongkong movies.
Do you know Hongkong movie? the movie made by Hongkong & Taiwan.
>> Do you know any Hongkong movies? It is the movie made in Hongkong & Taiwan.
Main actors were Mr. [Name], Mr. [Name] who were China movie star.
they could do China action like a Takwondo of Korea very well.
>> The main actors were Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name] who were Chinese movie stars. They do action well like Taekwondo in Korea.
but, now I liked a Korean Movie. In Korea there were a lot of movies. Do you know Parasite?
>> But, now I like Korean Movies. In Korea there were a lot of movies. Do you know Parasite?
Do you know Minari? this movies had a Academic Award in USA last year and this year.
>> Do you know Minari? this movies had an Academic Award in USA last year and this year as well.
But my best movie is Gwanghae(Chosun dynesty King in Korea). it was very impressive movie for me.
>> But my best movie is Gwanghae (Chosun dynesty King in Korea). it was a very impressive movie for me.
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