What is the best part of celebrating Lunar New Year?
학생이 쓴 원문
Lunar New Year is a time when families come together, often traveling long distances to reunite.
Spending quality time with loved ones is deeply meaningful.
Actually, when I was young, I thought the best part was the lucky money I received after bowing.
I remember being so excited to get as much lucky money as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]nie!~
I believe you spent the Lunar New Year with your family from a distance. That may have been the first time, but the effort you made merely to get in touch with them brought you closer together. <3
Chammy
Lunar New Year is a time when families come together, often traveling long distances to reunite.
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>> Families gather throughout the Lunar New Year, oftentimes going on a lengthy trip to be together.
Spending quality time with loved ones is deeply meaningful.
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>> Creating memories with loved ones is exceedingly worthwhile.
Actually, when I was young, I thought the best part was the lucky money I received after bowing.
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>> When I was younger, I believed that the lucky money I got after bowing was the most valuable part.
I remember being so excited to get as much lucky money as possible.
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>> I recall being ecstatic to receive as much fortune money as I could.
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