What is the best part of your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best time was when I went to Disneyland in Japan. That time remains as my best memory.
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The best time was when I went to Disneyland in Japan.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The best experience I had was going to Disneyland in Japan.
That time remains as my best memory.
>> That experience remains my fondest memory.
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