What is the best part of your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can imagine happy something, when I heard the word \"childhood\". maybe, because there were no worries.
In childhood, children do only plays without worries.
It\'s a best part of childhood.
강사 첨삭
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I can imagine happy something, when I heard the word \"childhood\". maybe, because there were no worries.
>> I can imagine something happy when I hear the word \'childhood.\' Maybe it\'s because there were no worries.
In childhood, children do only plays without worries.
>> In childhood, children only play without concerns.
It\'s a best part of childhood.
>> That\'s the best part of childhood.
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