What is the best pet animal for you?
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Hello there Sir [이름]!
I guess it\'s a good decision for you to not adopt a dog or any pets at home. Honestly, I can\'t even resist their adorableness. I would like to keep one at home but since I am too careful about my son\'s health, I refused to pet one. Thank you for answering this question, Sir! Have a great weekend.
~T. Eunice
Having a pet looks essential for living our life.
>> Correct!
I heard that dogs can find the cancer by smelling human body.
>> I heard that dogs can determine cancer by smelling the human body.
This is incredible things that pets are able to help human\'s life.
>> This is an incredible thing that pets are able to help humans live.
However, I don\'t like having pets at home. Because It may cause allergy.
>> However, I don\'t like having pets at home because it may cause allergy.
I want to prevent the health of my children and family as wellI.
>> I want to protect the health of my children and my entire family as well.
If my child express his opinion that he want to have a pet, I will not permit it.
>> If my child expresses his opinion that he wants to have a pet, I will not permit it.
>> OR: If my child expresses his opinion about wanting to have a pet, I won\'t allow him.
It will also occur noise upstair, if we are bring up dogs at apartment.
>> It will also occur noise upstairs, if we will pet dogs in the apartment.
People are really sensitive if noise occur from the downstair or upstair.
>> People are really sensitive of noise that occurs from downstairs or upstairs.
>> OR: I am bothered that people might complain about the noise of my dogs.
I do not want to make any conflict with my neighbor.
>> Correct!
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