What is the best pet animal for you?

2018-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Having a pet looks essential for living our life. I heard that dogs can find the cancer by smelling human body. This is incredible things that pets are able to help human's life. However, I don't like having pets at home. Because It may cause allergy. I want to prevent the health of my children and family as wellI. If my child express his opinion that he want to have a pet, I will not permit it. It will also occur noise upstair, if we are bring up dogs at apartment. People are really sensitive if noise occur from the downstair or upstair. I do not want to make any conflict with my neighbor.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

I guess it\'s a good decision for you to not adopt a dog or any pets at home. Honestly, I can\'t even resist their adorableness. I would like to keep one at home but since I am too careful about my son\'s health, I refused to pet one. Thank you for answering this question, Sir! Have a great weekend.

~T. Eunice 


Having a pet looks essential for living our life.

>> Correct!

I heard that dogs can find the cancer by smelling human body.

>> I heard that dogs can determine cancer by smelling the human body.

This is incredible things that pets are able to help human\'s life. 

>> This is an incredible thing that pets are able to help humans live. 

However, I don\'t like having pets at home. Because It may cause allergy.
>> However, I don\'t like having pets at home because it may cause allergy.

I want to prevent the health of my children and family as wellI.
>> I want to protect the health of my children and my entire family as well.

If my child express his opinion that he want to have a pet, I will not permit it.

>> If my child expresses his opinion that he wants to have a pet, I will not permit it. 

>> OR: If my child expresses his opinion about wanting to have a pet, I won\'t allow him.

It will also occur noise upstair, if we are bring up dogs at apartment.

>> It will also occur noise upstairs, if we will pet dogs in the apartment. 

People are really sensitive if noise occur from the downstair or upstair.
>> 
People are really sensitive of noise that occurs from downstairs or upstairs.

>> OR: I am bothered that people might complain about the noise of my dogs.

I do not want to make any conflict with my neighbor.

>> Correct!

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