What is the best pet to own?

2018-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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I think that puppies are best to own for the follow reasons. first, They always follow the owners. Eventhough the owner hurt them, They always belive their owners. It is the biggest adventages. But If the owner have not a confidence to care for their puppies perfectly, They have to forgive greeds. In case of me, when I was young, I lived in my house with few puppies. At that time It was hard to forget their existence, That means that After passing few years, I have to farewell with them. By this reason, I cannot live with puppies.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]! I like taking care of dogs too. They are indeed very good pets. See you tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Elisha

I think that puppies are best to own for the follow reasons.

>> I think puppies are the best type of pets to own because of the following reasons.
 first, They always follow the owners.

>> First, they always follow their owners. 

 Eventhough the owner hurt them, They always belive their owners.

>> Even though their owners hurt them, they still believe their owners.

It is the biggest adventages.

>> It is one of the biggest advantages of taking care of puppies. 
 But If the owner have not a confidence to care for their puppies perfectly, They have to forgive greeds.

 >> But, if the owner cannot take care of the puppy, they have to let them go.
In case of me, when I was young, I lived in my house with few puppies.

>> In my case, when I was young, I lived in a house with a few puppies.

At that time It was hard to forget their existence, That means that After passing few years, I have to farewell with them.

>> At that time, it was difficult to take care of them which is why I had to say goodbye after a few years.

By this reason, I cannot live with puppies.

>> Because of this, I decided not to take care of puppies any longer.

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