What is the best place for a vacation in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, Jeju island is the best place for a vacation in my country.
In Summer, we enjoy lots of beaches and a nice natural landscape.
In winter, we enjoy the snow and a nice winter scene.
Also, Jeju island always has lots of delicious foods.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! I\'d really like going on a trip. I also wanted to visit your country. Thank you for sharing and telling me about Jeju Island. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then. Take care! ~T. Lyn
In my opinion, Jeju island is the best place for a vacation in my country.
>>Correct. In my opinion, Jeju Island is the best place to spend a vacation in Korea.
In Summer, we enjoy lots of beaches and a nice natural landscape.
>>In summer, we can enjoy the beaches and stunning natural scenery.
In winter, we enjoy the snow and a nice winter scene.
In winter, we enjoy the snow and a nice winter scene.
>>We enjoy the snow and nice winter scenery in winter.
Also, Jeju island always has lots of delicious foods.
Also, Jeju island always has lots of delicious foods.
>>In addition, Jeju Island always has a lot of delicious food.
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