What is the best place to live in Korea?
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What is the best place to live in Korea
I think It depends on each age each age, men and female.
I prefer to live in the middle of city.
because I am always busy all day. I work and to do a lot of outside activities.
so I like to buy something to near my house on foot.
and also I can go shopping mall and see a movie at the cinema.
Fist of all, it is good to live because there are public offices near our apartment complex.
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Convenience is the best thing that urban areas can offer, Jullia. I totally agree that it is better to live in a city for many reasons.
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What is the best place to live in Korea>> What is the best place to live in Korea?
I think It depends on each age each age, men and female.
I think It depends on each age each age, men and female.
>> I think it depends on age and gender.
I prefer to live in the middle of city. because I am always busy all day.
I prefer to live in the middle of city. because I am always busy all day.
>> I prefer to live in the middle of a city because I am always busy all day.
I work and to do a lot of outside activities.
>> I work and have to do a lot of outdoor activities.
so I like to buy something to near my house on foot.
so I like to buy something to near my house on foot.
>> Therefore, I like to buy something near my house on foot.
and also I can go shopping mall and see a movie at the cinema.
and also I can go shopping mall and see a movie at the cinema.
>> Also, I can go to a shopping mall and see a movie in the cinema.
Fist of all, it is good to live because there are public offices near our apartment complex.
Fist of all, it is good to live because there are public offices near our apartment complex.
>> Most importantly, it is good to live in a city because there are public offices near our apartment complex.
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