What is the best place you have visited?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best place I\'ve ever been to is the sea of Jeju Island. I went to Jeju Island for my middle school graduation trip so we went to the sea. I remember the wind, mood, and even my clothes. I saw the black sand for the first time and It was wonderful. I like the place.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sere,
Jeju Island is famous for its beautiful landscape scenery and paragliding is the perfect outdoor activity to take in a 360-degree view of this wonderful island. During your experience, paragliding experts will choose the best place with good wind conditions to take you on an unforgettable ride. I hope I can visit Korea and see the beauty of Jeju Island.
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What is the best place you have visited?
>>What is the best place you have visited?(Correct)
The best place I\'ve ever been to is the sea of Jeju Island.
>>The best place I\'ve ever been to is the sea of Jeju Island. (Correct)
I went to Jeju Island for my middle school graduation trip so we went to the sea.
>>I went to Jeju Island for my middle school graduation trip so we went to the sea and celebrate there.
I remember the wind, mood, and even my clothes.
>>I remember the wind, mood, and even my clothes. (Correct)
I saw the black sand for the first time and It was wonderful.
>>I saw the black sand for the first time and it was wonderful.
I like the place.
>>I like the place very much.
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What is the best place you have visited?
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The best place I\'ve ever been to is the sea of Jeju Island. I went to Jeju Island for my middle school graduation trip so we went to the sea. I remember the wind, mood, and even my clothes. I saw the black sand for the first time and It was wonderful. I like the place.
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