What is the best place you have visited?

2024-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I went the best place was Jeju island, Bali island, and Hong chon Vialdi park. Frist, Jeju is I was piked tangerins. And Bali island was I swimming pool was good. And Vivaldi park was it has pool and waterpark. These places are my best place I visied.

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~ T. Camille

I went the best place was Jeju island, Bali island, and Hong chon Vialdi park.

>> The best places I have visited are Jeju island, Bali island, and Hong Chon Vialdi Park.
Frist, Jeju is I was piked tangerins.

>> First, when I went to Jeju, I picked tangerines.

And Bali island was I swimming pool was good.

>> And, in Bali island, I swam in the swimming pool and it was good.

And Vivaldi park was it has pool and waterpark.

>> Lastly, Vivaldi park has awesome pools because it\'s a great waterpark.

These places are my best place I visied.

>> These places are the best places I visited.

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