What is the best present you have ever received?
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My best present is a very big teddy bear doll. I received at the age of 8, that time I really liked dolls. And, I received the doll from my parents. Now, I still have the doll and it is still my favorite doll.
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My best present is a very big teddy bear doll.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My best present is a very big stuffed toy.
I received at the age of 8, that time I really liked dolls.
>> CORRECT!
And, I received the doll from my parents.
>> CORRECT!
Now, I still have the doll and it is still my favorite doll.
>> CORRECT!
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