What is the best restaurant in your town and what do they serve there?

2022-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have to say it\'s the outdack of chicken restaurants in my town. It\'s place to sell chicken. I think the oil here is really clean that\'s why chicken tastes clean. And draft beer is very delicious. :)

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Hi Elic!

Sounds like a good place to hang out with friends. Chicken and beer. :)

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I have to say it\'s the outback of chicken restaurants in my town.

>> I have to say it\'s the outback of chicken restaurants in my town.

It\'s place to sell chicken.

>> They sell chicken there.

I think the oil here is really clean that\'s why chicken tastes clean.

>> I think the oil here is really clean that\'s why the chicken tastes clean.

And draft beer is very delicious. :)

>> Their draft beer is very delicious too. :)

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