What is the best season in your country to go on a travel? Why?

I think fall is the best season in my country to go on a travel.In spring we have fine dust because of China.So,we shouldn't go out many time.In summer, it is very hot.When I visit the gyeongju it was very hot so I can't see a heritage well.Winter is too cold to go out.But fall is not too much cold and hot.We can go out and enjoy outdoor activities such as skating,go to the art exhibition. Dear [Name], What will you do on Children's Day.I think my mom and I will visit my grandmotherhouse.Do you want to get some present?I don't need to get some present.I want to relax in Children's Day.The short vacation is coming.Hope you will have a good time.And make an appointment on this weekend.I want to see a movie with you. [이름]

Hello my dear [이름]^^   Thanks for your time with this homework. You did a great job in writing. There were just minimal grammar mistakes. Good job! Have a great evening and see you on Thursday!   Teacher Liza   I think fall is the best season in my country to go on a travel. >> Correct In spring we have fine dust because of China. >> In spring we have a fine dust on the air that is coming from China. So,we shouldn\'t go out many time. >> So we shouldn\'t go out often. In summer, it is very hot. >> Correct When I visit the gyeongju it was very hot so I can\'t see a heritage well. >>When I visited Gyeongju it was very hot so I can\'t see the heritage well. Winter is too cold to go out. But fall is not too much cold and hot. >>Winter is too cold to go out but in fall it\'s not that hot and cold. We can go out and enjoy outdoor activities such as skating,go to the art exhibition. >>We can go out and enjoy outdoor activities such as skating and going to art exhibits. Dear [Name], >> CorrectWhat will you do on Children\'s Day. >> Correct I think my mom and I will visit my grandmotherhouse. >> I think my mom and I will visit my grandmother\'s house. Do you want to get some present? >> Correct I don\'t need to get some present. >>Correct I want to relax in Children\'s Day.>> Correct The short vacation is coming. >> Correct Hope you will have a good time. >>Correct And make an appointment on this weekend. >> Let\'s make an appointment on this weekend. I want to see a movie with you. >> Correct[이름] >> Correct