What is the best season in your hometown?
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I think it depends on people\'s preferences, I like spring. In spring, I feel a new flower bloom and a sense of life begins. I volunteered in Timor-Leste for 3 months, and I longed for spring in Korea while living in the hot weather of about 36 degrees every day.
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I think it depends on people\'s preferences, I like spring.
>> CORRECT!
In spring, I feel a new flower bloom and a sense of life begins.
>> In spring, I feel like I\'m a new flower that blooms, and a sense of life begins.
I volunteered in Timor-Leste for 3 months, and I longed for spring in Korea while living in the hot weather of about 36 degrees every day.
>> CORRECT!
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