What is the best shopping experience you\'ve had?
학생이 쓴 원문
My most memorable shopping experience was when I went to Galleria, a department store in Cheonan with my family. At that time, my parents bought me everything I wanted. Therefore, I had a very nice day that time. I want to go to the Galleria with my parents again.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sally!😍
I totally agree that your shopping experience is memorable because of your parents\' treats. They really wanted you to be happy!😉
~Kelly
My most memorable shopping experience was when I went to Galleria, a department store in Cheonan with my family. >> Correct.
At that time, my parents bought me everything I wanted.
>> Correct.
Therefore, I had a very nice day that time.
>> Correct.
I want to go to the Galleria with my parents again.
>> Correct.
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