What is the best thing about being a mother ?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 10 years old that I made my dream.
One day I will be a good mother. Mother is the hardest job, but if you try best later on you earned great result.I gave to two sons best opportunities because we moved in the US.
Kid is learning everything from parents. I talked by myself.If I being lazy,our kids as same as me.
I dug many ways tried my best. I was a working mom, always think of not only quanity times, I shared with
My sons spent quality times.I made a my dream. I feel like I don’t eat food, my minds have full not much hungry, because they give me a joy, and happiness. Now I have many options. I love learning.
Once a week I spend with my older son’s family. We are respecting each other ,I have great relationship with my
Daughter-in-law. I am very lucky. I am praying every single day. I don’t want bragging person, I want be a
humble person.When kids are little we need lot of efforts, If we did right thing kids shows right way.
I am very proud of my two son.
강사 첨삭
I really think being a mother is both the best and hardest responsibility to have. Congratulations for being a good mother! ~
- Teacher Debbie
>> I had a dream when I was 10 years old.
One day I will be a good mother.
One day I will be a good mother.
>> That one day, I will be a good mother.
Mother is the hardest job, but if you try best later on you earned great result.
>> Being a mother is the hardest job, but if you try your best, great results will happen.
I gave to two sons best opportunities because we moved in the US.
>> I gave my two sons the best opportunities because we moved in the US.
Kid is learning everything from parents.
Kid is learning everything from parents.
>> Kids learn everything from their parents.
I talked by myself.
>> I thought to myself.
If I being lazy,our kids as same as me.
>> If I will be lazy, my kids will be the same as me.
I dug many ways tried my best.
I dug many ways tried my best.
>> I tried my best to find ways.
I was a working mom, always think of not only quanity times, I shared with my sons spent quality times.
>> I was a working mom, but I still spent quality times with my sons.
I made a my dream.
>> I achieved my dream.
I feel like I don’t eat food, my minds have full not much hungry, because they give me a joy, and happiness.
>> I feel like even if I don\'t eat food, my mind is still full because they give me joy and happiness.
Now I have many options. I love learning.
>> correct
Once a week I spend with my older son’s family.>> I spend time with my eldest son\'s family once a week.
We are respecting each other ,I have great relationship with my Daughter-in-law.
>> We respect each other and I have a great relationship with my daughter-in-law.
I am very lucky. I am praying every single day.
>> correct
I don’t want bragging person, I want be a humble person.
>> I don\'t want to be a bragging person. I want to be humble.
When kids are little we need lot of efforts, If we did right thing kids shows right way.
>> We should show our children the right thing so that they will follow the right way.
I am very proud of my two son.
I am very proud of my two son.
>> I am very proud of my two sons.
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